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Published August 29, 2016
Stillness seeped from my muscles, leaving the fibers weakened and my nerve endings frazzled like an ebbing power surge
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I’d sunk beneath waves of hysteria, the monitors howling in alarm as my heart rate skyrocketed. It wasn’t until I had heard those awful sounds that I’d even realized my arms were bandaged and that I was hooked to wires and IVs. The visual made the injuries real, and a slew of aches and pains trampled my body like a metaphysical stampede
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My equilibrium was tipsy, swimming in love, lust, and a fresh bout of fear
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Why does the past feel so heavy, so tiring?
O my. The prose was lyrically emotive and filled with straight-to-the-heart imagery. Lumetta's narrative was almost perfect. Everything started perfectly, but slowly the plot stuttered and pivoted into varied directions, becoming an amalgamate of Paranormal/Hired Assasin/Russian Mob Princess/Discordant families and finally, a quest for true love.
We meet Lucie at a vulnerable period in her life and Lumetta capitalizes by building the suspense to levels that makes one eager to unveil the next chapter. The book blurb sets this up perfectly:Lucie Gideon wakes up in a hospital, alone. Her family is dead and her home is gone, but she can't remember a thing. She soon discovers, however, she can glimpse the future, and everything she sees seems to revolve around a mysterious man she's never met.
Greyson Ellicott hasn't been a part of normal society in a decade. As a contract killer, he's learned to deaden himself so he doesn't have to think or feel for anything or anyone. His carefully buried memory cracks open and reminds him of what he left behind. When Lucie and Greyson meet head-on, destinies collide. Grey doesn't want to care about -let alone fall in love with- the crazy girl who has visions of him, but she's in the crosshairs of a murderer and he may be the only one who can save her.
How did Lucie lose her memory? Was there foul play? Who was the mysterious man she kept seeing in her visions? These I needed to know unfortunately, the plot took back place to the interwoven relationships of the characters.
Once we meet the cast of supporting characters, who happened to be too perfectly placed, the plot finally frayed. The odds of Lucie being admitted at the same hospital where Vivi worked as a therapist was too much of a coincidence. I didn't like it. It felt like the author cheated. Nash and Drew being related to Grey? Nash being married to Vivi? Lucie being released from the hospital into Vivi's care? ALL seemed contrived.
Sadly, by the time Grey was introduced, I slowly began to lose interest and when he finally meets Lucie I felt even more disconnected and it damn near drove me into a mental state which necessitated giving myself little pep talks to ensure I did not do a DNF.
I did finish it and regardless how much I wanted to, I couldn't love it.
Overall, I felt cheated the author chose to align the characters in a manner that felt inorganic so much so they all lost their voices. Notwithstanding, I loved Lumetta's use of imagery and Lucie's character was written beautifully, which accounts for the 2 stars.
All in all, You Are Here is a great book, beautifully written with an amazing ending. I totally recommend it.